[DENIED] Yonina Brennstein

[Elias Hayes]

STATE OF SAN ANDREAS FIRE DEPARTMENT APPLICATION

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PART I: IN-CHARACTER


A. Personal Information

Name: Yonina
Surname: Brennstein

Do you own a passport?: Yes
Do you own a driving license?: Yes

Which divisional branch are you applying for?: EMS

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B. Motivations and Personality

What are you motivations for joining the San Andreas Fire Department? [Minimum 50 words]
Since I am in SAPD/SANG/DB, I would like to also become part of SAFD so that I can gain more experience in saving lives. I am also interested in a life as a doctor, since I will not be able to work in SAPD for my entire life, and why not let SAFD be an option.a

Describe with your own words, what does it mean to be a Firefighter or alternatively, a Paramedic [Minimum 50 words]:
Being a doctor for me is more than just having a job where I receive a salary at the end of the month. For me, it means dealing with many different people and many different problems, which I would need to treat as if they were my own, with great care and delicacy.

PART II: OUT OF CHARACTER

What is your Discord ID?: 11007744
State all the groups and factions you are currently part of:
IG : SAPD/SAFD/SANG/DB
State all your previous names:
Nathan Halberg
What is your time zone?: CET +2

PART III: Contract
I, Yonina Brennstein, agree to the terms of the contract, to its sections and to the lawbook of San Andreas.
I agree to ensure their faithful observance, to provide medical assistance to the citizens as well as any governmental group and obey lawful orders issued by superiors.

[Charlotte Martinez]

PENDING STATUS

STATE OF SAN ANDREAS FIRE DEPARTMENT APPLICATION STATUS

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Yonina Brennstein

We have found errors in your application, and therefore, set your application into pending status. You have 48 hours to correct the errors or your application will be denied. If you do correct the errors, you may reply to this post in which you inform us that you have corrected the errors.

The faults spotted are as following:
* FAULT #1 The answers you provided do not clearly meet the minimum requirement of 50 words for each question.
* FAULT #2 Multiple grammatical and sentence structure errors were identified throughout the application.
* FAULT #3 The motivation for joining SAFD is insufficiently developed and lacks specific reasoning.
* FAULT #4 The explanation of the Firefighter/Paramedic role is vague and does not describe the professional responsibilities involved.

Signed,

San Andreas Fire Department
SAFD Senior Instructor
SAFD Lieutenant
San Andreas Sheriff Department
Deputy Sheriff
Traffic Enforcement Unit

[Charlotte Martinez]

DENIED

STATE OF SAN ANDREAS FIRE DEPARTMENT APPLICATION STATUS

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Yonina

We regret to inform you that after a negative evaluation, we have decided to reject your request to enroll in the department. Your application was rejected based on the following reasons:

* Applicant failed to respond within time and Lack of Interest

To re-apply, you need to wait at least 2 week(s). You may apply again after the 16th of January. Any submitted application before the stated period will be immediately denied.

Signed,
Charlotte Martinez
Fire Lieutenant